First synposis draft

After creating a preliminary storyboard based in a school, we have been asked to focus on creating a synopsis based on our final trailer. Using the school as a base, and a real life story about a teen's suicide, me and my new group (consisting of Will and Shenade) have created this plot.

"A few weeks ago, a girl committed suicide by drinking bleach and hanging herself, because of the amount of abuse she were receiving from other students. This girl used to be a fun, bubbly, and magnificent individual, but when a very discrete picture spread around the school, the girl could never recover from such torment since. Even from that day, the bullies that put the pictures up and aggravated her death continued to mock the girl’s actions, including making sick remarks on her decision of suicide. Not long after her death, the group of bullies proceeded to express their final mark of ultimate disrespect, by urinating on her gravestone. However, as the heavens opened up, the girl reappears in front of the boys but clothed in a white, angelic robe, and with a face that is best described as demonic. The girl starts to reappear in their school, and in their personal premises, with the intent to avenge the vandalised memory that was left of her. Terrified by the bloodstained mirrors, the notes foreshadowing decease, and the vile presence of the girl they once bullied, the group that heavily influenced her death could only wonder how close they may be to death’s unforgiving clutch. The tables have drastically turned, and their psychological welfare can never be the same."

Inspiration to our synopsis - http://www.huffingtonpost.com/2012/10/11/amanda-todd-suicide-bullying_n_1959909.html